I'm a Japanese student trying to improve my writing skills in English. So if you have time, please correct my English. It'll greatly help my writing. Oh, you can write your comments without correcting my English, but please don't use the space for advertising...
I'm a Japanese student trying to improve my writing skills in English. So if you have time, please correct my English. It'll greatly help my writing. Oh, you can write your comments without correcting my English, but please don't use the space for advertising...
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Wow. "It's the world of the subtle and profound."
That is a wonderful sentence, Saku.
And so is the rest of your post. A couple little changes, maybe:
possibly "something extradordinary appearing from the thick fog"
and also: "we feel that kind of thing" (not things) near ourselves (maybe on rather than in) a foggy day.
In a foggy day isn't wrong, precisely; on a foggy day is more the usual way of saying it.
I have been thinking of how in Japanese you see the dreams that come in the night (instead of as we say "have" a dream in the night). The Japanese makes a whole lot more sense! Maybe we should change our language.
We get fog in the early morning and evening here; it rises up from the river, and makes everything look very mysterious. And cold and damp.
Thank you.
I was also thinking about the tenses of Japanese.
I wrote that we don't have a progressive tense, but I found that there is a progressive form in our language (we normally use it in only present tense though).
But certainly there is no perfect tenses.
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