Even while I'm distressed, the sun shines, a flower blossoms, and the breeze blows.
Then I feel stupid and stop worrying.
I'm a Japanese student trying to improve my writing skills in English. So if you have time, please correct my English. It'll greatly help my writing. Oh, you can write your comments without correcting my English, but please don't use the space for advertising...
I'm a Japanese student trying to improve my writing skills in English. So if you have time, please correct my English. It'll greatly help my writing. Oh, you can write your comments without correcting my English, but please don't use the space for advertising...
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Poetry is an expression that may break rules . . .
However, may I suggest . . . "blooms" or "a flower blossoms".
Maybe also, "Then I feel stupid and stop worrying."
Any Donkey @ Treowth
I thought I posted a 'Thank you' comment, but I didn't. It may be too late, but I'll say "thank you" right now.
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