Let's rewrite yesterday's post.
"Easygoing is a good thing.
Look at the Earth who's age is almost 46 billion years."
Isn't this better than the yesterday's one?
I'm a Japanese student trying to improve my writing skills in English. So if you have time, please correct my English. It'll greatly help my writing. Oh, you can write your comments without correcting my English, but please don't use the space for advertising...
I'm a Japanese student trying to improve my writing skills in English. So if you have time, please correct my English. It'll greatly help my writing. Oh, you can write your comments without correcting my English, but please don't use the space for advertising...
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