"When you say evil words, you also hear them from others."
or
"When you say evil words to someone, you also hear others saying the same things to you."
Which one is better?
I'm a Japanese student trying to improve my writing skills in English. So if you have time, please correct my English. It'll greatly help my writing. Oh, you can write your comments without correcting my English, but please don't use the space for advertising...
I'm a Japanese student trying to improve my writing skills in English. So if you have time, please correct my English. It'll greatly help my writing. Oh, you can write your comments without correcting my English, but please don't use the space for advertising...
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Are you asking about style or content, Saku? I like the first sentence best, myself.
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